英文作文修改 - 傷害罪
By Ursula
at 2013-11-06T00:00
at 2013-11-06T00:00
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Horrifyingtrafficaccidentexperience
Threeyearsago,Iwenttojoinedthekindergartengraduationceremony
whenrodemymotorbikeonthewayUnfortunately,anothercar
crashedmelieddownontheroadthenwearewaitingfortheambulancetocome.
That'smyfirsttimeinthesurgery,Ispentwholetimeinthehospitalonsummer
vocation.Duringthesurgerywithoutagoodsleptandactinconveniencemust
relyonwalkingaidstowalkthatmademefeltphysicalandmentalsufferingabout
fewmonths.Mymotheralwaysstayinthemysidetotakecareofmeandshe's
worryaboutme.She'sreallyhopetobehealthy
(intheshorttime/assoonaspossible),metoo.
Thisaccidentinvolvedinthelawsuits.Thejudgeconclusivejudgementhim
OffensesofCausingBodilyHarmwithNegligence過失傷害罪
BeforetheseIdon'tknowwhattodosoIsurfthenet
tofindoutandasklegaladviser/consultantaboutthisaccidentrelationlaw/rule
questionsandprovedofmycertificateincludingthepictureswhichthe
vehiclecameraIhadlearnedalotofknowledgefromthisaccidentofthelaw.
Actullyhedrov
Threeyearsago,Iwenttojoinedthekindergartengraduationceremony
whenrodemymotorbikeonthewayUnfortunately,anothercar
crashedmelieddownontheroadthenwearewaitingfortheambulancetocome.
That'smyfirsttimeinthesurgery,Ispentwholetimeinthehospitalonsummer
vocation.Duringthesurgerywithoutagoodsleptandactinconveniencemust
relyonwalkingaidstowalkthatmademefeltphysicalandmentalsufferingabout
fewmonths.Mymotheralwaysstayinthemysidetotakecareofmeandshe's
worryaboutme.She'sreallyhopetobehealthy
(intheshorttime/assoonaspossible),metoo.
Thisaccidentinvolvedinthelawsuits.Thejudgeconclusivejudgementhim
OffensesofCausingBodilyHarmwithNegligence過失傷害罪
BeforetheseIdon'tknowwhattodosoIsurfthenet
tofindoutandasklegaladviser/consultantaboutthisaccidentrelationlaw/rule
questionsandprovedofmycertificateincludingthepictureswhichthe
vehiclecameraIhadlearnedalotofknowledgefromthisaccidentofthelaw.
Actullyhedrov
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By Andrew
at 2013-11-07T15:52
at 2013-11-07T15:52
Threeyearsago,onedaywhenIwasridingamotorbikewenttojoinedtheakindergartengraduationceremony,whenrodemymotorbikeonthewayunfortunately,anotheracar
crashedhitmesothatIfelldownandliedlaydownontheroad,thenconsequentlythecardriverandIwearewerestayingatthesitewaitingfortheambulancetocome.
1.第二行anothercar，除非您也是開車，否則不能說”另一輛車.2.acarcrashme,crash撞得粉碎.扭曲如墜機、車撞硬物如電線桿、牆等，用來形容人被車撞，不是很合適。3.lie說謊liedlied,lie躺laylain.
That'smyfirsttimeinthetohaveasurgery,Ispentwholetimesummervocationinthehospitalonsummervocation.DuringAfterthesurgery,Icouldn’tgetwithoutagoodsleptandactconvenienceImustinconvenientlyreliedonwalkingaidstowalk,thatwhichmademefeltsufferphysicallyandmentallysufferingaboutfewmonths.Mymotheralwaysstayedinatthemysidetotakecareofmeandshe'sveryworryaboutme.She'sreallyhopingthatIcouldrecovermyhealthquicklytobehealthy(intheshorttime/assoonaspossible),andmetoo.
1.無法好睡，用助行器應是在手術後。2.thatmademesuffer，此處之that為關係代名詞，依文法此字，不可用於非限定用法，即此字前不可有逗點，因此改為which.3.assoonaspossible儘可能的快，用在病情的恢復上，並不合適，因病人對病情的恢復，沒有主導力。
Thisaccidentinvolvedinthealawsuits.Thejudgeconcludedthejudgementthathimthedrivercommitted“OffensesofCausingBodilyHarmwi
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